This is incredible! You did SUCH a brilliant job melding poetry and power, showing that they're really just the same thing. Beautiful work! I'm going to go read it again
It might be because some teacher at our school requested it to be unblocked for usage in class or smth like that. Or our school is just generally lax abt the whole thing
Omg I love this poem so much! All the rhymes are so flawless and really add such an amazing rhythmic quality to your poem. "And I hold myself up to the light like a swatch / Contrasting the pigments until I look botched" Utterly amazing! Your descriptions and your narrative are so nicely woven together, I also love the message of the poem and where it all ends. Great work! :)
yeah I really love it! one of my favorite abe moments haha
Thank you!! That was my goal :)
This is incredible! You did SUCH a brilliant job melding poetry and power, showing that they're really just the same thing. Beautiful work! I'm going to go read it again
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.
This is an awesome quote! I feel like it really speaks to the truth that some things feel just right, even if we're not sure why.
I appreciate it!
It might be because some teacher at our school requested it to be unblocked for usage in class or smth like that. Or our school is just generally lax abt the whole thing
Tysm lol
Omg I love this poem so much! All the rhymes are so flawless and really add such an amazing rhythmic quality to your poem. "And I hold myself up to the light like a swatch / Contrasting the pigments until I look botched" Utterly amazing! Your descriptions and your narrative are so nicely woven together, I also love the message of the poem and where it all ends. Great work! :)
this is rlly good love the powerful usage of line breaks