I just wrote a poem about a really hard breakup I went through, and here’s some lines that really stood out to me:
I tried to be enough for you
But this could never be.
When you left me
You tore out my heart.
I gave you my trust
And you lied to my face.
I struggle to heal
From this hole in my chest.
It holds me back
Just like you did
As I try to progress
In my relationships.
Hi, here's a few lines I wrote recently:
It’s been over two years now
But some nights
It feels like there’s a
Gaping wound
In my heart
Shredding me to pieces from the inside
Beautiful collection of observations. I particularly like that first stanza!
Brilliant twist at the end. And an excellent exegesis of the psychology of storytelling!
Wow, this is incredible!
Thank you
This poem was inspired by this photo: https://collections.artsmia.org/art/105014/charles-alec-william-soth
Thanks!
This is so cool! I mean like what? This is insane.
This photo is so beautiful!
[Illustration by Ice Blink, YWP]
I just wrote a poem about a really hard breakup I went through, and here’s some lines that really stood out to me:
I tried to be enough for you
But this could never be.
When you left me
You tore out my heart.
I gave you my trust
And you lied to my face.
I struggle to heal
From this hole in my chest.
It holds me back
Just like you did
As I try to progress
In my relationships.
Hi, here's a few lines I wrote recently:
It’s been over two years now
But some nights
It feels like there’s a
Gaping wound
In my heart
Shredding me to pieces from the inside
Beautiful collection of observations. I particularly like that first stanza!
Brilliant twist at the end. And an excellent exegesis of the psychology of storytelling!
Wow, this is incredible!
Thank you
This poem was inspired by this photo: https://collections.artsmia.org/art/105014/charles-alec-william-soth
Thanks!
This is so cool! I mean like what? This is insane.
This photo is so beautiful!