An excellent story! The way you slowly revealed the mystery and the narration of what was happening, I was hooked to the end. And what a sad bittersweet ending it was! Keep writing!
yeah I didn't know what it was until now but I kinda had the feeling something like this was building up, trying to kill everyone who's not the Aryan ideal. I know Trump will deny that he's like Hitler, but...coming from a lesbian Jew, I will hit the wrong buzzer on that one!
i'm so close to crying. I lost a really really good friend last year (like the kind of friend who you're comfortable undressing with, who bakes with you and then shares their deepest secrets over the banana bread that left a still-there burn mark on their thigh) because they forced me to say awful things to another friend of mine, and this hits so close to home. thank you
These line breaks are awesome. Lovely piece
An excellent story! The way you slowly revealed the mystery and the narration of what was happening, I was hooked to the end. And what a sad bittersweet ending it was! Keep writing!
I love the line "I have learned to allow myself to change."A powerful line
I love this poem, especially the first two lines. Finding someone with these beautiful qualities is a rare and precious find. Eloquently written
thank you so much!
yeah I didn't know what it was until now but I kinda had the feeling something like this was building up, trying to kill everyone who's not the Aryan ideal. I know Trump will deny that he's like Hitler, but...coming from a lesbian Jew, I will hit the wrong buzzer on that one!
spooky and excellent I love this! nice job!
i'm so close to crying. I lost a really really good friend last year (like the kind of friend who you're comfortable undressing with, who bakes with you and then shares their deepest secrets over the banana bread that left a still-there burn mark on their thigh) because they forced me to say awful things to another friend of mine, and this hits so close to home. thank you
Yes. I was on vacation and it just seemed perfect.
you should draw it!!!!!