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Great poem!

The Storm's Eye 4 months ago

Thanks!

His Majesty 4 months ago

I love this!

Kai 4 months ago

You capture something really interesting about monarchy here! While there is a lot of negative things to say about social convention, it does provide people with a script! And having a script can help keep the peace! 

His Majesty 4 months ago

Exquisite! "I woke up when the lights dimmed for the/ benediction./ our chaplain' s favorite poem was wild geese by mary oliver." so much said and unsaid in these lines! 

migration 4 months ago

"Words flowed/ out of my mouth like gasoline at the pump..."  This is brilliant and very relatable! Sometimes when I'm walking down the road I wonder what it would be like to suddenly leap into a neighbors yard --- move through the squares instead of only along the lines. 

on the off-road? 4 months ago

"Riding horses to race dusk" Love the subtle alliteration "Stone city in heaven" love the juxtaposition! Gorgeous poem packed full of exhilarating imagery! 

I Miss a Place That Doesn't Exist 4 months ago

Love how you throw in that suprising line "brown lip liner." Sounds like a crazy to do list! 

The To-Do List of a Rising Senior 4 months ago

Amazing! You've learned the lessons of adolescence much better than I!  Very powerful declaration! 

Who I Was Isn't Who I Am 4 months ago

Just posted it above <3

Tiny Write by AbbyG, June 23 2024 4 months ago