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ooh nice!! personally I've never tried matzah crack or the caramel matzah bc my family always makes flour less cookies or something but it sounds good!

Ode to Bread 3 months ago

The amount of meaning you’ve put into this poem is incredible!

Lavender and Gardenias 3 months ago

Beautiful writing as always. Your words so vividly people.

Stained-Glass Girl 3 months ago

This is beautifully written in such a painful way. Great work.

Bus thoughts 3 months ago

All my doubts and fears listed in one poem, how nice

Keep writing!

the weight of maybe 3 months ago

Aw, that's sweet :)

Love the imagery here!

Honeyed Rose 3 months ago

Woah, so colorful! How'd you do that?

Neon Splash 3 months ago

Thank you! I appreciate it! I admire your writing a lot, too! 

Bus thoughts 3 months ago

Thank you so much! <3

Stained-Glass Girl 3 months ago

Wow, I read this a few times and the meaning slowly came to be and became deeper and more beautiful. The first line "you should be an image in stained-glass windows" is such a unique first line that immediately drew me in. "And wonder at how your voice sounds like church bells" is another fantastic line. Amazing. Keep writing

Stained-Glass Girl 3 months ago