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I really love this! I love the line "One scroll, one like, and suddenly everything else we’ve done disappears in their eyes". It's so true. I also like when you said "And one day, they'll realize it" because it made me sort of realize that this is our version of when parents say "you'll thank me one day" or other things along the lines of that. We hope that one day our parents will just understand that hard work comes with rest and taking care of yourself. So cool to see another person from MD!

We’re More Than Just Kids 3 months ago

I really love this! I love the line "One scroll, one like, and suddenly everything else we’ve done disappears in their eyes". It's so true. I also like when you said "And one day, they'll realize it" because it made me sort of realize that this our version of when parents say "you'll thank me one day" or other things along the lines of that. We hope that one day our parents will just understand that hard work comes with rest and taking care of yourself. So cool to see another person from MD too!

We’re More Than Just Kids 3 months ago

This is so great. I love your descriptions of people.

The West Wind 3 months ago

thank you!!

The West Wind 3 months ago

I love this kind of description! Beautiful writing

The West Wind 3 months ago

thank you so much!!! i'm going to do 3 more so there's one for each of the 4 winds haha so hopefully i can channel the same energy to write the next ones!

The West Wind 3 months ago

Thank you!

The Coin 3 months ago

I love this so much!! It's so detailed and adventurous! My favorite line is "tasting of gasoline and better times"

The West Wind 3 months ago

Thanks!

Back Then 3 months ago

Thanks!

Someday 3 months ago