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Assuming that you have moments of him being horrible, go back to those. Pull in things he had said or actions. I don’t know if that is obvious but that’s all I can think of lol. Good luck! 

Tiny Write by June, May 15 2025 4 months ago

I'm glad you're doing better. Progress is always a great thing even if it's slow. I hope your healing is quick! <3

It Gets Better 4 months ago

Of course! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Too Soon 4 months ago

Sorry, you'll see this on my dashboard twice.  I accidentally didn't submit it to the challenge the first time, and couldn't figure out how to delete it.

Rainy Day 4 months ago

I know how you feel. Thank you for writing this.

Too Soon 4 months ago

My comfort show is probably The Owl House. I watched it a year or two ago, and I'm just emotionally attached to the characters and the plot.

Tiny Write by bumblebea, May 13 2025 4 months ago

I can't wait until you're a famous writer and I can brag about knowing you 

concrete bloom 4 months ago

Hey! My MC also has a horrible boyfriend so I have some experience in this lol. You could have her flashback to some moments where she didn't realize he was being horrible, or someone maybe dropping hints to her about it. I suggest multiple little flashbacks or one big one that represents the first time she got the hint but didn't take it or something like that. Overall, its about doing what you want to do and remember, you can always change it later!! :)

Tiny Write by June, May 15 2025 4 months ago

I watch this show called Hannibal which is this psychological thriller show and it's not at all comforting in nature but I love it so much lol

Tiny Write by bumblebea, May 13 2025 4 months ago

omg that's so cool, can't wait to see it!

Tiny Write by Alex, May 15 2025 4 months ago