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ooh i like this!! i'd love to see where it'd go - who's maggy?? why is the main character out on the streets? what happens next? nice story!!

this is really good!! scary, dystopian, and terrifyingly relatable, but your writing is powerful & this story is awesome.

Welcome!!

I know right??

thanks!

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thank you!

Such a beautiful contrasting moment of nature. Well captured!

Visual and powerful.

This is a beautiful use of metaphor and allegory! Very well done.