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This is beautiful. Burdens of life tend to stack up more and more throughout each season of life. in Essence, aging is grieving all the years before and the perspectives we lacked that made us more innocent. You have an amazing way with words and your metaphors are incredible!

Before the Dust 6 months ago

Thank you!!

Bonfire 6 months ago

nice!

ywp is a movement of poets 6 months ago

haha, lol. love your username! I am also a fool with a pen, identifying as a poet. :)

ywp is a movement of poets 6 months ago

That looks so cool!!

Bonfire 6 months ago

have to say I'm a fan of fools :)

ywp is a movement of poets 6 months ago

Thanks! 

a death worth living 6 months ago

I love this poem so much! I might be wrong, but it kind of feels like a poem about OCD, even if it's not it is still so good! Love the routine-likeness of it. :)

bite your tongue, and swallow 6 months ago

omg i love this little gem! such a good poem and i love all the rhymes :)

a death worth living 6 months ago

I love those movies! I wish I could say the same for The Summer I Turned Pretty by the same author, I find the books much better 

Tiny Write by Goldenrose, August 27 2025 6 months ago