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This is very sweet. A fresh snowfall really does seem to have that magic over us, reminding us we're still kids at heart, when we need to hear that message from the universe most. I love your descriptions of the setting and musings about what the season brings up emotionally.

Snowy Nostalgia 5 months ago

the title made me thing of the book a ballad of songbirds and snakes

 

The Snake and the Songbird 5 months ago

Oki!

What Do We Need? 5 months ago

Sorry for the late reply. I'm not the one who wrote the tag but there's a bunch of them all around Austin Texas. Really insperational message though!

What Do We Need? 5 months ago

This is so beautiful!! The descriptions are breathtaking, and I had to read it over twice because of how much I loved it! Also I can't believe you're only 11--this seems like something that could be in an anthology written by adults!! :)

generational 5 months ago

beautiful & hauntingly true. love the line breaks. <3

When You Are No Longer Young 5 months ago

Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing this piece even though it sort of felt like a confession I wasn't supposed to make. And thanks for noticing the prose style! :D

generational 5 months ago

Thanks so much! It means a lot to me that you connect with my work!

The Snake and the Songbird 5 months ago

i read it a month ago!! i really enjoyed it and the concept was cool :)

Tiny Write by Alex, March 24 2025 5 months ago

That's true, it might not be enough but we all have to try. Only then do we have a chance

Enough 5 months ago