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Thank you. It means the world to me. And I’m really happy you enjoyed reading it the way I hoped. Also about the way I use line breaks is super sweet of you to say. I think it’s what shows to the reader how to capture the words in the perspective I wrote it in. 

Again, thank you so much, and hope you have a lovely evening. 

Sleep? We don’t know her 9 months ago

I feel like I could envision everything that was happening just by the dialogue! That’s so cool!

Smoke Signal 9 months ago

this was absolutely incredible. your writing style is positively gorgeous and I love the dark twist you added. 

Persephone 9 months ago

i loved dress coded! thanks for this recommendation, I hadn't seen the first rule of climate club so i'll check it out. :)

Book Club post by Popcorn, November 22 2023 9 months ago

they are definitely two of the most important people i know:)

To my sister 9 months ago

The description in this poem is beautiful. I love the lines "My skin is covered by endless rows of goosebumps". I can picture this in my mind. Your use of boldness and line breaks is so creative and gives so much to the poem. This poem is beautiful and is full of emotion. 

Sleep? We don’t know her 9 months ago

I loved reading this, it kept me on the edge on my seat. It was also incredible the way you made the characters come to life.

Outline of an Invisible Girl 9 months ago

"a snow lamb as fired slabs." what an image! 

The Gift 9 months ago

This is SO good. I like the twist and how you defined imaginary in so many ways.

Outline of an Invisible Girl 9 months ago

I feel like this image is so perfectly realistic, I can just picture the whole barn from looking at this drawing.

33 Degrees 9 months ago