Summer already seems so long ago! With exquisite detail you've so well captured that laidback, not-a-care-in-the-world feeling that you only find next to a body of water, with time to waste. A breath of fresh air.
It's funny how limiting yourself in some way (telling yourself you're going to focus on one very specific topic or use only one material or one color) can sometimes challenge us in just the right way, and bring out the best in our creativity. Experimenting with only purple tones really paid off for you, because this is striking!
It's so easy to think of the frigid, sharp-edged, barren qualities of the season, but this poem brings out the beautiful side of winter, too! It's easy to forget.
I'm with you there! And nothing quite like that crunch beneath your feet, am I right? Sometimes I see a particular leaf and think to myself, Now that is a crispy one, perfect for my foot to make friends with...
Trying to balance school and something else you love is always hard, and sadly does make anyone feel torn between the two. It can be hard to find a balance or needing to choose one. The picture really captures it well I think
Summer already seems so long ago! With exquisite detail you've so well captured that laidback, not-a-care-in-the-world feeling that you only find next to a body of water, with time to waste. A breath of fresh air.
It's funny how limiting yourself in some way (telling yourself you're going to focus on one very specific topic or use only one material or one color) can sometimes challenge us in just the right way, and bring out the best in our creativity. Experimenting with only purple tones really paid off for you, because this is striking!
It's so easy to think of the frigid, sharp-edged, barren qualities of the season, but this poem brings out the beautiful side of winter, too! It's easy to forget.
I'm with you there! And nothing quite like that crunch beneath your feet, am I right? Sometimes I see a particular leaf and think to myself, Now that is a crispy one, perfect for my foot to make friends with...
Thank you. I was very nervous to share this as I don't write many short stories and this one is close to my heart.
Thank you for being so kind.
Wow thank you so much!
Thank you so much!
This is so good!!
Trying to balance school and something else you love is always hard, and sadly does make anyone feel torn between the two. It can be hard to find a balance or needing to choose one. The picture really captures it well I think
I love the rhyming! I think it even adds to the narrator wondering about catching fireflies. Keep writing!