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Did anyone get my Alice in Wonderland joking line in the eighth stanza??

Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Goldfinch 8 months ago

AAAAHHH this is so deep and true and AMAZING! To be a human (at least being me as a human) is definitely to be a poem. Thanks for writing this!

To Be A Poem 8 months ago

Wow! Where can we find this guy?

The Face in the Hill 8 months ago

They were intended to read like that, but you put it so beautifully! Thanks!

A Bouquet of Haikus 8 months ago

Thank you so much! Little me mostly watched badass women stories (what few Disney has, anyway) and when I eventually watched and read things like Snow White and the Seven Dwarves, Cinderella, and Sleeping Beauty, I was pretty shocked. I've always been trying to shed light on topics like these, so thanks for noticing!

this old storybook 8 months ago

Nerd maybe, but a cool nerd, a thoughtful nerd. Thanks for sharing this insightful piece!

My Path in Life 8 months ago

Thank you!!

Spring 8 months ago

We would have so much to learn from ourselves, if only we had a glimpse into the future! But all we can do is soothe our inner child, give them the reassurance they still need to hear. I think writing these kinds of letters is such an important healing exercise for us all, no matter how grown we are. It'd be worth repeating in five years time again -- and no doubt, your 18-year-old self, just about to graduate, will be calling out 13-year-old you for her currently undetectable naivete, too!

5 years ago; dear 8 year old me 8 months ago

Oh-o, is this truly the end of this story, meant to be left as a brief flash fiction? I think his friends and classmates are being too harsh on his -- we all quite naturally change our attitude and quirks and personality to some degree in each new setting, depending on the emotions and character of our peers -- so I was skeptical of any "fakeness" he was being accused of and rooting for him instead!

You're better then this 8 months ago

This is the true essence of spring! You've captured and bottled it, and with such a spark of joy intertwined.

Spring 8 months ago