Okay I got ya: How about expanding upon the lines "I like sweaters, jeans, engineering and sports, / but they expect makeup, dresses, and to be a wife who supports"? Like, add in a couple lines expressing jealousy towards the boys, ex: "How come they get to fight / while I have to stay polite? / Can't I have my own cause? / And why do I have to do chores all day / while they go out to run and play? / I didn't choose this loss!"
Hope it was helpful! If you'd like any other kind of feedback, lmk
I actually wrote this poem a couple months ago and lit up when I saw this contest! It brings me absolute joy to be able to share something I'm so passionate about with other people who may share that same passion. ~Thank you to Alumni Advisor Sam Aikman!
"Fast Months, Slow Days" is this week's featured photograph on vtdigger.org, up now in their Life & Culture section! Everyone can check it out now, here! vtdigger.org/life-culture
Okay I got ya: How about expanding upon the lines "I like sweaters, jeans, engineering and sports, / but they expect makeup, dresses, and to be a wife who supports"? Like, add in a couple lines expressing jealousy towards the boys, ex: "How come they get to fight / while I have to stay polite? / Can't I have my own cause? / And why do I have to do chores all day / while they go out to run and play? / I didn't choose this loss!"
Hope it was helpful! If you'd like any other kind of feedback, lmk
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Yeah! He’s truly appalling.
Thank you! I really appreciate it!
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yeah!! lol :) there'll be another chance, maybe not in the middle of the night next time loll
I actually wrote this poem a couple months ago and lit up when I saw this contest! It brings me absolute joy to be able to share something I'm so passionate about with other people who may share that same passion. ~Thank you to Alumni Advisor Sam Aikman!
Anytime : )
And thank you for your kind words!
"Fast Months, Slow Days" is this week's featured photograph on vtdigger.org, up now in their Life & Culture section! Everyone can check it out now, here! vtdigger.org/life-culture