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oooo this was so good, especially the last paragraph. Agree with everything YellowS said. What a dark and bold retelling

Persephone 10 months ago

this is simply beautiful. What a stellar opening line too, congrats on the daily read

First Snow 10 months ago

this made me smile

Haunting Hands 10 months ago

This is so interesting I keeping finding ways to interpret each line and how they fit together. really makes you think. keep writing!

As the Crow Lands 10 months ago

hm agreed with TheDemiDevil, I didn't realzie poetry books have a bit of a narrative/story throughout the book, but going by that logic however many poems can fit into that story. My favorite book of poems was like 300 pages lol. Its the Random House Book of Poetry so I personally would say however many poems you think are interesting and fit together. Publishers might be looking for a specific number

Tiny Write by Writer1326, October 16 2023 10 months ago

Pinterst poetry/writing prompts. Or, sometimes I just don't write for a bit.

Tiny Write by Anna_banana, October 23 2023 10 months ago

I love starting with an opening line and having it mean one thing, than by the end you repeat the last line but it has a whole knew meaning! It's not easy but so fun to figure out

Tiny Write by Anna_banana, October 23 2023 10 months ago

Originally I was on a writing site called storybird in middle school because my friends had accounts and wrote a tone of poems on there! Then the website decided to start charging monthly fees and I quite the site lol. Eventually found YWP thro a teacher

Tiny Write by Anna_banana, October 27 2023 10 months ago

Star, cosmos, planet, universe  things. What an interesting question

Tiny Write by Anna_banana, October 27 2023 10 months ago

I feel it!

An Autumn Tree 10 months ago