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Writer's Block 2 years ago

Thank you!  I intended to post this in response to the challenge "Climbing" is there any way I could do that without reposting this?

Scaling 2 years ago

The real spirit of the countryside. I can almost smell the fresh air. 

Summer Day 2 years ago

Ahh, this has always been one of my very favorite methods of shaking myself out of writer's block: writing about writer's block itself! Clearly you've broken through whatever barrier was in your way because you've wound up with a wonderful piece, and your sense of humor really shines through!

Writer's Block 2 years ago

"You are at peace." Peaceful it is. This poem so well highlights winter's quiet beauty, something easy to lose sight of when the gray days seem neverending... Lovely read.

Footprints 2 years ago

Thank you! 

9 Lines of Friendship 2 years ago

Wow! This poem intrigues me--who/what is it about? I love and the imagery of the jar and your use of questions to create a desperate tone. 

Trapped in a Jar 2 years ago

What a beautifully fraught scene! I love your use of sensory detail and repetition (misstep/misfortune).

a flurry of snow 2 years ago

I love how you captured the feeling of being a friend in the "now" but also in the "always."

9 Lines of Friendship 2 years ago

DEFINITELY read The Inheritance Games! They're what got me out of a reading rut and got me into mystery

Tiny Write by Transb33, December 18 2023 2 years ago