Treasure this picture forever, they're now listed as an endangered species I believe. You must have caught it while it was perfectly still, not even a hesitation of the wings yet: Its markings and antennae look so very sharp. You must have a steady hand!
Very interesting, I didn't know programs like this existed! I'm sorry to hear it no longer takes place, post-COVID.
So much of this was fascinating to read about, and taught me things I would never have otherwise learned (how to identify traces of foxes, for example). If you're interested in revisions, you may be able to edit a little of this down for a tighter read about your former typical daily experience there: Details like specific snacks and your friend's birthday present last year add humor but can sometimes distract from the gist. But for the most part, your strength is in your descriptions!
I am so glad this poem was a piece you could relate to! that is always my goal when I write poetry about accepting oneself and becoming comfortable with the things we try and hide. I truly appreciate the feedback, and as for the book "The Bell Jar" I haven't read it but after reading that line I would be happy to check it out!!
Thank you so much for your writing suggestions.
I read the second one and I am working on the third one. Have you met Purity yet? She is my absolute favorite ever:)
Interesting angle to cut into the eclipse, that’s what makes good poems.
I’m working on the second one haha :) Have you?
Treasure this picture forever, they're now listed as an endangered species I believe. You must have caught it while it was perfectly still, not even a hesitation of the wings yet: Its markings and antennae look so very sharp. You must have a steady hand!
Very interesting, I didn't know programs like this existed! I'm sorry to hear it no longer takes place, post-COVID.
So much of this was fascinating to read about, and taught me things I would never have otherwise learned (how to identify traces of foxes, for example). If you're interested in revisions, you may be able to edit a little of this down for a tighter read about your former typical daily experience there: Details like specific snacks and your friend's birthday present last year add humor but can sometimes distract from the gist. But for the most part, your strength is in your descriptions!
You flipped the phrase right on its head, funny! This was unbelievably cute and brought a smile to my face to read.
I am so glad this poem was a piece you could relate to! that is always my goal when I write poetry about accepting oneself and becoming comfortable with the things we try and hide. I truly appreciate the feedback, and as for the book "The Bell Jar" I haven't read it but after reading that line I would be happy to check it out!!
This makes me smile. Love it.
Yessss! Have you read the other three books?