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I loved that book too! The different character perspectives made the book very captivating. 

Book Club post by abigail_and_bean, March 21 2025 3 months ago

Awesome! That’s so cool!!!

Tiny Write by Alex, May 15 2025 3 months ago

Do you have any suggestions on how to make it better?

What Is Lost 3 months ago

Thank you for your feedback! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I wanted to end the story in a way that was striking and made the reader think about the damage that was done.

What Is Lost 3 months ago

Thank you!!

Dinner With You 3 months ago

I really love this!  The words are so careful and true, and I was enraptured so quickly!  

Dinner With You 3 months ago

That's so fun! Thanks!

Tiny Write by Popcorn, May 19 2025 3 months ago

Your story captured me every step of the way, and it was perfect: just as I got comfortable with something, it was changed, which may not sound good but it actually was. The ending too is so sad but true and needed to happen.

What Is Lost 3 months ago

I like them too!! I do a thing with my friends a lot when we're bored in class - they give me 3 random words and I write them a short poem. it works super well for writer's block and I love walking through the hallways and seeing my poems taped up in people's lockers :D here's one if you want it: Menu. Mist. Defendant. Fortune. Breath.

Tiny Write by Popcorn, May 19 2025 3 months ago

yeah I agree with bumblebea & twoblueviolets, try having your MC kind of montage through some moments where he was being either obviously horrible (audience anger at a good read moment!) or more subtly bad (realization). hope your writing goes well!

Tiny Write by June, May 15 2025 3 months ago