Damn, I really love how thoughtful this is. I wish more people thought this thoroughly about what phrases we use as a society. I really appreciate the comment "everything deserves to be analysed.
Thank you so much! This was kind of a reminder to myself of how things and people can change, but that doesn’t mean it’s the end of the story. Just a new chapter.
This is amazing! I love how it tells a story of an entire relationship, through the ups and downs, and how even once you've found the person you love, you might not stay together forever, but the love is still there in a different way - I also loved how you put breaking up as "a transition back to friendship". Very relatable and a unique way of turning such a strong story and relationship into poetry. I really enjoyed reading this! :)
I really like this!
Damn, I really love how thoughtful this is. I wish more people thought this thoroughly about what phrases we use as a society. I really appreciate the comment "everything deserves to be analysed.
I think I liked the ice form best, but they’re all awesome!
Awww thank you so much <333
Thanks :)
Thank you <3
Oh my gosh, this sounds like it would be terrifying! I’m so glad that you’re okay and nothing happened. <3
Thank you so much! This was kind of a reminder to myself of how things and people can change, but that doesn’t mean it’s the end of the story. Just a new chapter.
This is amazing! I love how it tells a story of an entire relationship, through the ups and downs, and how even once you've found the person you love, you might not stay together forever, but the love is still there in a different way - I also loved how you put breaking up as "a transition back to friendship". Very relatable and a unique way of turning such a strong story and relationship into poetry. I really enjoyed reading this! :)
I love this. It’s beautifully written, and I love your choice of words. I don’t really have any critiques, but I really enjoyed reading this!